Death In Space

In our class, we watched a video called Death In Space. In this video, there were a couple of funny ways to die in space. Here is mine…

Bobby walked down the corridor to the space ambulances, it was his the first day on the job. He was one of those confident people who thought it was going to be easy. Well no, it wasn’t going be easy. The war had just ended on the planet of Salty Springs. Many human sacrifices were made and many were injured and needed assistance. But the problem was, everybody was gone! There was no one to assist Bobby. So he took it upon himself to fly a space ambulance. As the engines rumbled, ready for take off, Bobby decided to press the big red button because he liked big red buttons. And out of know where he shot up the like a bottle rocket into space and ascended to the planet of Salty Springs. When he arrived at Salty Springs, there was a big cloud of red smoke covering the horizon. As he zoomed in on the red cloud he could see 2 people carrying an injured person. Then Bobby hovered over them and pressed the big blue button that said land. But a split second before he could notice, he was going to land on them instead of beside them. But it was too late, the shuttle was already speeding to the ground like water falling from a bathtub…

By; Jack Gregory

5 thoughts on “Death In Space

  • March 14, 2018 at 10:36 am

    That’s a great story Jack! Great descriptive words!!!!
    Xo Mom

  • March 15, 2018 at 9:44 am

    Thanks, Mom!

  • March 15, 2018 at 6:25 pm

    Hi, I’m Charlie,
    Why did you use a town from Fortnite? I liked your descriptive words and how you crashed on top of an injured person and some ambulances. Come visit my Blog at

    • March 16, 2018 at 9:35 am

      Hello Charlie,

      Thank you for coming down to my blog.I don’t know why I used a town from Fortnite but I did anyways because why not.

      – Have a wonderful day


  • April 8, 2018 at 1:04 pm

    Good story and great writing skills Jack, well done!



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